Daveys limericks, poems or simple rhymes??

davey

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I first classified myself as a writer of simple limericks as my father was before me but then I honed the craft and it became more subtle and I then thought it might be poetry befitting a more recognized genre - whatever - it comes from life ; the heart and the brain. Enjoy or puzzle but I won't be muzzled - see what I mean its bubbling away there?

A never never day

I sat in frangipani glade
the dogs stretched out in midday haze
the seaward breeze moved gentle leaves
this never never land can freeze!

the early morns now cool and sharp
Gone is that humid apple tart
but still the sun creeps up the sky
and by midday has drooped the eye

just sit it out till twilight comes
and off shore breezes hum their tunes
the never never freeze at night
need canvas swag till bleak sunlight

the welcome tinge of daylight dawns
as dew hangs heavy, still not warm
the 'billy' lets off steam not dew
and soon cold hands have thawed anew

davey © 2023

Never Never Landscapes

they stand unmoving in the sun
these never never sentinels
they watch aloof as we pass by
this is 'our land' the old catch cry

from granite outcrop; gnarled twisted trees
in harmony they catch the breeze
we've been here from the dawn of time
your cameras can't see our minds

we've watched the rivers twist and turn
grow into sand and then return
we shared this land with those we knew
would save the gifts the gods imbued

and then we watched the concrete streams
cut through the land fractured 'dreamtime' dreams
you didn't want to touch our stone
rest 'neath our trees; hear hunting calls

you stayed upon your concrete streams
lived your lives with man-made dreams
you turned your backs on all the Gods
who forged this 'never never' lodge

but we still stand; unmoved, unmanned
we'll watch you die and turn to sand
then welcome back the roaring streams
and hear once more the 'dreamtime' dreams

the concrete streams will crack and break
and trees break through with green replace
we're called the 'never never' land
twas crafted with almighty hand!

Davey © 2023

these are two distinct aussie bush poems that came from the environment I live and onced worked in
 

Never Never Landscapes

they stand unmoving in the sun
these never never sentinels
they watch aloof as we pass by
this is 'our land' the old catch cry

from granite outcrop; gnarled twisted trees
in harmony they catch the breeze
we've been here from the dawn of time
your cameras can't see our minds

we've watched the rivers twist and turn
grow into sand and then return
we shared this land with those we knew
would save the gifts the gods imbued

and then we watched the concrete streams
cut through the land fractured 'dreamtime' dreams
you didn't want to touch our stone
rest 'neath our trees; hear hunting calls

you stayed upon your concrete streams
lived your lives with man-made dreams
you turned your backs on all the Gods
who forged this 'never never' lodge

but we still stand; unmoved, unmanned
we'll watch you die and turn to sand
then welcome back the roaring streams
and hear once more the 'dreamtime' dreams

the concrete streams will crack and break
and trees break through with green replace
we're called the 'never never' land
twas crafted with almighty hand!


A Lonely Valentine

I used to visit once a week
From "community friends who care"
they said that her need for love
was as longing as her stare

so I just sand and chatted
as she looked through wooded gloom
she seemed to be oblivious
of the din around her room

I told her of my childhood
my loves and lost ones too
what the world was up to
and how the years just flew

then one week out of the blue
I mentioned Valentine
Said 'I wonder how I'll do this year'?
just to pass the time

the muscles in her cheeks grew taut
and her eyes closed narrower still
"I've never had a valentine-
And guess I never will"

the words hung in the moment
and the silence deafened me
I think I fumbled some response
and took my leave to flee

I thought about those words all night
they burrowed in my head
a lost soul had just cried out
and all I'd done was fled

my visits ceased for several weeks
as I went about my life
and then one frosty snow clad day
I returned, my step was light

as I entered through the hall that day
I was called aside to hear
'your lady passed away last night -
no pain - no longer cared'

I walked across to where she'd sat
a card lay on the ground
I picked it up and read the verse
it spoke of loves lost and found

but underneath in shaky hand
a message had been left
you always were my valentine
and always were the best!

Davey © 2023
 
Another Never Never one [well I do live in it everyday!] - it becomes a bit addictive, clings to you, absorbs you and comforts you!

We of the Never Never

The never never holds you
Like a woman to the breast
It nourishes and comforts
And yet there is a test

The gold and treasures hidden
Until you’ve learnt the key
Survival don’t come easy
But it’s offered all for free

You need to pay attention
To the lessons of the day
They won’t be oft repeated
Not learnt; you’ll have to pay

But if you read the signs
The land the totem tales
You will prosper in this never land
And live to tell your tales

You will see it stand and watch you
Say rest, take what you will
Take nourishment but share it all
Not selfish with your kill

And as you grow with seasons
You will learn the rhyme the reason
And love the never never
And never go away

davey © 2023
 
Reflections Across a Table

I came across intentional as he sat with Ms Maybe
I asked him why his glasses shone - my reflection beckoned me

Maybe said its accidental don't take it all to heart
He trained for taxidermy but once he went to far

There was a terrible accident when once he whirled his knife
He started with an elephant and it ended with some mice

So now he's incognito with marguerites standing by
His stare is a reflection of the blueness in the sky

He has an alto ego that swings from he to she
One minute a cool sweet boy the next a slut for free

So do not make assumptions when his knife is on high ground
I'd hate to think your taxidermy time had just come round!

Our Pets
The cat sat on the mantle piece
it didn't move a paw
they'd washed it in alabaster
and dried it by the door

the bird sat in the gilded cage
hanging upside down
it swung occasionally in the breeze
but didn't make a sound

the dog stood by the fire hearth
with a glazed look in its eyes
the 'dermist said "give it a week'
then varnish both its eyes

the hamster scurried around the room
looking for a meal
and then the batteries run out
and it stopped behind the screen

the rabbit looked quite lively
as it lay upon the plate
they'd forgotten to take the fur off
and it burnt whilst on the grate

Granny just sat and looked
at all this menagerie
they'd stuffed her after easter
he hand held cup with tea

me mother said "it's quieter with everyone at rest"
now go brush ya hair, bible out
to church in sunday best!

Davey © 2023
 
I have written some personal love poems as most craftsmiths do - mine vary from very personal to quirky and fun. This first one is personal and painful as they often are:

Loves Won and Lost

I chanced upon her on a greying autumn day
She smiled just briefly, then pressed on; was I just in the way?
I thought there was a flicker there, a glance that stayed just longer
And as our paths crossed more that year that flickering glance grew stronger

I'm not sure when we crossed that line that said this is forbidden
But by then the die had been cast down our passions wildly driven
We grasped at every moment like it was the last on earth
We laughed and cried and held onto that love for all its worth

I guess we knew that we were heading for a cliff top like decision
That would test us to the very core, cloud even loves clear vision
We skirted round that fatal day, Still talked about tomorrows
Said we would work it out somehow despite surrounding sorrows

We went our separate ways again promising not for ever
We phoned, we wrote and tried to meet but the demons were too clever
With broken hearts and heavy steps we trudged our separate paths
As as the time grew longer, our souls were all but trashed

I guess it finished on a 'high' of love and pain and longing
You get on with your life and find some more belonging
We wrote much later in the years and reminisced like lovers
We thought the painting would not dry but the laquer tears had covered

As I look back on all my paths ours was the brightest moment
Just for a while time did stand still and give us joys enthronement
I think I met an angel then sent down to test and steal me
And whisper "love that can't be shared is counterfeit believe me"

Davey ©2023
 
I have written some personal love poems as most craftsmiths do - mine vary from very personal to quirky and fun. This first one is personal and painful as they often are:

Loves Won and Lost

I chanced upon her on a greying autumn day
She smiled just briefly, then pressed on; was I just in the way?
I thought there was a flicker there, a glance that stayed just longer
And as our paths crossed more that year that flickering glance grew stronger

I'm not sure when we crossed that line that said this is forbidden
But by then the die had been cast down our passions wildly driven
We grasped at every moment like it was the last on earth
We laughed and cried and held onto that love for all its worth

I guess we knew that we were heading for a cliff top like decision
That would test us to the very core, cloud even loves clear vision
We skirted round that fatal day, Still talked about tomorrows
Said we would work it out somehow despite surrounding sorrows

We went our separate ways again promising not for ever
We phoned, we wrote and tried to meet but the demons were too clever
With broken hearts and heavy steps we trudged our separate paths
As as the time grew longer, our souls were all but trashed

I guess it finished on a 'high' of love and pain and longing
You get on with your life and find some more belonging
We wrote much later in the years and reminisced like lovers
We thought the painting would not dry but the laquer tears had covered

As I look back on all my paths ours was the brightest moment
Just for a while time did stand still and give us joys enthronement
I think I met an angel then sent down to test and steal me
And whisper "love that can't be shared is counterfeit believe me"

Davey ©2023
Nice one Davey, who said Australian Men are not typically high-achievers in the romance stakes?
 
here's another which is not mine but echos the same sentiment - pain! pc down atm try :kiss me like we're gonna die by Meg Washington - that one will scratch the heart strings a bit!!
 
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Toyboy Tales

I was feeling kind of lonely and a little out of cash
so I signed up for a 'toyboy' thing, a different kind of bash
some joker took me through the drill and told me man me phone
and when they ring don't hang around and make sure you're still at home

I'd been billed as Muscle Murphy on 041993624
6 foot 2 and rippling thighs they tingle at the door
when I asked them what the age range was
they said 'just ladies right?'
you work six on and one to rest to get the testosterone right

they said you start at 6pm and finish when you like
but just make sure you're fresh next day or rather 6 at night
so I superwaxed me muscles, shaved chin, combed waxen hair
and waited for the phone calls from the ladies without care!

What I hadn’t bargained for was that men are just from Mars
They have this fast and lightning touch thirty seconds to the stars
But the ladies were from Venus and would have no heed of rush
They wanted the full romance from cocktails, chat and moonlight brush

So I found myself in trouble only one full job a night
I was rapidly losing money and me money belt grew tight
I knew that I could manage three, just had to speed the process
But how to do it with the charm, and give them all the mostess?

I devised a plan of action, I would turn up at the door
Rose in hand, swept off their feet and whisper ‘J’adore’
Rush them to the bedroom and smoother them with kissing
And be out the door before they woke and wondered what they’re missing

It worked for the first half dozen and I thought it’s goin well
then I came across bronzed brunette – straight from hell!
I handed her the rose and swept her off her feet
But before I moved another inch she had brought me to my feet

The perfume overpowering made my head just whirl around
I was seeing stars and bedroom floors and could not hold me ground
When I awoke at crack of dawn the lady she had flown
My weekly earnings all had gone and my manly pride was blown


Davey © 2023
 
here's another which is not mine but echos the same sentiment - pain! pc down atm try :kiss me like we're gonna die by Meg Washington - that one will scratch the heart strings a bit!!

here's the words to Meg Washingtons - Kiss me like like we're gonna die?


Lyrics

You don't have to give me a reason
I know as well as you
Both of our hearts committing treason
And barely getting through
You don't have to say that you're sorry
For your double time heart
It's not your fault, please don't worry
Cause I saw this from the start
You don't have to answer
Cause I know the reason why
You don't have to say you're gonna miss me
Just as long as you kiss me like we're gonna die
You don't have to say it was some thing
You felt right to your bones
You don't have to say I was someone
Who felt to you like home
You don't have to say you'll be calling
Oh, we both know that's not true
You don't have to say you were falling
I was falling too
You don't have to give me an answer
I know the reason why
You don't have to say you're gonna miss me
Just as long as you kiss me like we're gonna die
Kiss me like we're gonna die
Source: Musixmatch
Songwriters: Megan Washington / Alexander Tirheimer / Alexander Evert / Samuel Fischer
Kiss Me Like We're Gonna Die lyrics © Sony/atv Sonata, Nighttime Crowd Publishing, Rill Dill, Small Giant Publishing Alpha, A Evert Publishing, Origin Music Publishing Pty Ltd, Hipgnosis Notes

I find her an enchanting aussie singer - who had a nervous lisp from childhood but mastered it in different ways and was by singing she is also a poet craftmistress in her own right
 
4,55 am wt oz 29.04/23

And of course a privilege to share one of Englands great poets and novel writers Thoma Hardy.

The Darkling Thrush - (1898)

I leant upon a coppice gate
When Frost was spectre-grey,
And Winter's dregs made desolate
The weakening eye of day.
The tangled bine-stems scored the sky
Like strings of broken lyres,
And all mankind that haunted nigh
Had sought their household fires.

The land's sharp features seemed to be
The Century's corpse outleant,
His crypt the cloudy canopy,
The wind his death-lament.
The ancient pulse of germ and birth
Was shrunken hard and dry,
And every spirit upon earth
Seemed fervourless as I.

At once a voice arose among
The bleak twigs overhead
In a full-hearted evensong
Of joy illimited;
An aged thrush, frail, gaunt and small,
In blast-beruffled plume,
Had chosen thus to fling his soul
Upon the growing gloom.


So little cause for carolings
Of such ecstatic sound
Was written on terrestrial things
Afar or nigh around,
That I could think there trembled through
His happy good-night air
Some blessed Hope, whereof he knew
And I was unaware.

he also wrote quite a few books like Far from the Maddening Crowd and Tess of the Darbevilles etc - his own story and his love life is a rather curious tale - which many of us today may find rather unbelievable and hard to fathom? but let's leave that for another time maybe?
 
6.40am w/t oz sat 29.04/23

Here's another about the same woman in Loves Won and Lost - I just adored her - she died recently in UK I heard - and now the oft asked question - why am I still here?


The Day Before

The day before we didn't know that each of us existed
Life has a habit of surprising, worlds get twisted
We could have looked the other way, walked right on not passed the day
But we were not to know the price that each of us would pay

Our faltering steps were hesitant, our talk was shy but knowing
We joked and smiled and liked the looks that each of us were showing
And so we circled 'round the need that in our hearts embedded
Just waiting for the moment of commitment "there I've said it"

It was like a secret door into a magic garden
Once crossed through forever changed the devil had got his bargain
But we had no time to look back out in to a drab, cold presence
We'd bathed ourselves in loves fresh glow, we felt its every essence

We talked about our lives, our needs, our defects carefully hidden
Those early days were not about bearing all we'd ridden
Each encounter was well prepared, rose coloured form the start
We had to pack in so much love, avoid the poisoned darts

We lived on double planes those days, each longing for the other
Living humdrum cocooned lives, then crystalised as lovers
We stole the hours from others lives not realizing we be indebted
And one day accounts would be called, scrutinized and vetted

Some say that love is simple and sublime
Take care of all our needs, but isn't it also blind?
We couldn't see the pain and hurt it can inflict on others

And so we finally made the greatest sacrifice of all
we squared our debts and said goodbye, the pain cut to the core
They say that no greater love has man than to die for other
I think we understand this now, goodbye my dew-eyed lover!

Davey © 2023
 
She Came in From the Gloom

We met one night by chance
As a storm raged on outside
The rest of us were partying
She walked in without a smile

I was busy doing Tangos
So just caught her with a glance
And as the night wore on
She just sat and watched us dance

I remember stopping for a pause
Sat down with drink in hand
And then she gentle sidled up
No drink within her hand

I recall I said “well how are you
not seen you ‘round these parts?”
and then was yanked upon my feet
Another tango part

The evening just became a blur
As the pace of things grew faster
And I just caught a glance of her
And kept seeing her flash faster

It was way past dawn when all had gone
And truly trashed my pad
And then I saw her on the couch
Just watching me slouch past

I eventually smooched besides her and asked
“Well ; watcha think of that?”
She looked at me and blinked a while
And purred “well honey I’m just a stray cat?

davey © 2023
 
She Came in From the Gloom

We met one night by chance
As a storm raged on outside
The rest of us were partying
She walked in without a smile

I was busy doing Tangos
So just caught her with a glance
And as the night wore on
She just sat and watched us dance

I remember stopping for a pause
Sat down with drink in hand
And then she gentle sidled up
No drink within her hand

I recall I said “well how are you
not seen you ‘round these parts?”
and then was yanked upon my feet
Another tango part

The evening just became a blur
As the pace of things grew faster
And I just caught a glance of her
And kept seeing her flash faster

It was way past dawn when all had gone
And truly trashed my pad
And then I saw her on the couch
Just watching me slouch past

I eventually smooched besides her and asked
“Well ; watcha think of that?”
She looked at me and blinked a while
And purred “well honey I’m just a stray cat?

davey © 2023
Are these all based on personal experience?
 
A theme on a theme on a theme?

I sat upon my comfy lounge
the fire gently nuzzling
Someone was pulling pints of beer
but the sound was kinda puzzlin?

My ‘invites’ open every eve
from bewitching gloom till late
but I guess the weather’s not been too kind
and it is only Feb in haste?

Still I had my trusty tome
half drunken pint or three
and Paganini’s cello
played like a breathless three?

And then she appeared ; stopped for a while
A hesitant stare and then small smile
She took in the rest of room in glances
It was then I knew my chances?

She really only had two options
make for the bar or turn around?
But then I spoke as if on cue
“It’s quiet tonight – you look quite blue”?

I should have kept my big mouth shut
as I saw bartender’s muffled guffaw
Well I guess I was guest but also owner
Was I excusing or just bemoaner?

Well I guess we may never know
But I could have swore her smile did glow
And as she headed towards my clime
Well in for a dollar or a dime?

tbc I think - hang in with me!

Davey © 2023
 
The Lone Cowboy

Walked into a bar south of Houston
quiet place ; old tunes on the box
as I came to the bar, saw her starboard afar
head sunk to her chest ; hat all ajar

Must have been summat that drew me
usually stirred clear of this type
long golden curls and a stetson half twirled
so I sat seat apart ; heard muffled laugh

So I beckoned the barman to fill me
bourbon on ice long tall glass
I nodded to fill up the ladies
he nodded ok then he laughed

He knew how to stay outa trouble
and moved away cleanin the bar
then I asked “ drink me with Ma’am
she murmured ‘yea back again Sam?
I whispered ‘no I’m just desperate dan”!

She laughed as she turned to review me
looked me up then across then right down
then asked “ to whom do I owe the pleasure
I said “well Ma’am I’m just an easy come listener
taught by my grandpappie from down in Cheyenne”

I said let’s sit in the corner in the sunlight
then ya can see me for sure
I don’t come with no side but carry some pride
and can listen for hours that’s how I am

She slid off the stool and I caught her
I expected a stiffened response
but she sunk into me low, and I walked her real slow
‘till we sat in sunlight aglow

She told me a tale long and elaborate
of first romances of course many times
of tough cowhand abuse that started obtuse
and finished up bruised and unkind

she’d lost touch with her kids over eons
Xmas cards that had faded not sent
And now she just struggled alone in the gloom
from the homestead; the bar then back home

I thought to myself can’t do much
but now started felt compelled to ascend
from the floor of her hell to at least standin
So brewed coffee and hit the deep well!

I won’t bore you with all the years details
they are well trodden pathways for some?
But by the end of the first week we’d vowed abstinence
and were cooking and laughing and meek!

I said Ma’am I gotta keep movin
can’t stay in one place for too long
how ya feelin right now? Are ya cruisin?
She asked “Dan are ya askin me out”?​

Davey © 2023
 


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