Enhance This Sentence: The Evening Sunset Brings Calm To My Soul.

[SeaBreeze]

Please enhance this sentence:

The evening sunset brings calm to my soul.

 

[Keesha]

As peace & serenity sooth me.

 

[Ferocious]

The evening sunset brings calm to my soul, but soon, the the moonlight will enhance the night with it's silvery sheen.

 

[Kaila]

The evening sunset brings calm to my soul...
.... gently yet deeply, as it permeates my being and encompasses my entire awareness.

 

[Aneeda72]

The evening sunset brings calm to my soul and, OUCH, stupid mosquito.

 

[Aunt Marg]

The evening sunset brings calm to my soul, whisking me to a magical place far, far away where peace and solitude awaits.

 

[jujube]

The evening sunset brings calm to my soul; YEEHAW! my in-laws have finally left and this *#@&%! day is over!!!!!

 

[Gary O']

Please enhance this sentence:

The evening sunset brings calm to my soul.

In order to enhance, I must rearrange the words a little bit;

 

[fmdog44]

In order to enhance, I must rearrange the words a little bit;

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[Lewkat]

The evening sunset brings calm to my soul and the sandman is stalking me.

 

[Ferocious]

The Evening Sunset Brings Calm To My Soul, and there, in the house opposite, Mrs Armstrong gently squeezes her blackheads in the cool night air.

 

[Ken N Tx]

In order to enhance, I must rearrange the words a little bit;

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[Meanderer]

The evening sunset brings balm to my soul.

 

[Ronni]

The evening sunset brings calm to my soul

The beauty and tranquility of the evening sunset brings a gentle calm to my turbulent soul.

 

[RadishRose]

The evening sunset doesn't affect me.

 

[Meanderer]

Keep calm, and enjoy a Japanese sunset.

 

[Meanderer]

 

[Gary O']

Please enhance this sentence:

The evening sunset brings calm to my soul.

Oh, it's so easy to be trite with these types of things

So

I'll give this a serious go;

 

[Judycat]

The sunset, in all its reddened glory, smashes my being into such a state of smooth tranquility that I no longer care whether sunsets occur in the morning or the evening.

 

[Meanderer]

Sunrise... Sunset...
"They look so natural together Just like two newlyweds should be. Is there a canopy installed for me? Sunrise, sunset, sunrise, sunset. Swiftly fly the years Laden with happiness and tears."

 

[Pepper]

The evening sunset brings calm to my soul.

I think that's a beautiful sentiment just the way it is. No need for "improvement" IMO.