He's Back and a Pain

dusty

Senior Member
Last Wednesday afternoon I took a shower, washed my long hair (to my waist) and went about my business of making dinner. At 8 o'clock pm I went into the bathroom and all was fine. I watched tv for awhile and headed for bed a 1 am.
As I walked down the hall towards the bathroom, I could hear running water and I started to pray the guy above me (Mike) hadn't broken a pipe. Or worse yet, my bath hadn't. When I got in there no water from above but my shower head was facing down on the stool I use for my soaps and it was running, not hard but enough to fill the shower pan. I had just been in there at 8 pm, I live alone, and the shower stall and hoses etc are all new 3 months ago. The water had spilled over the edge so I took care of it all and wiped up the floor with heavy towels.

Fast forward to this morning. I wake up, do my bathroom routine, head to the kitchen for coffee and bring said coffee to lazyboy to read my emails. There on my sofa were the parts of a pen someone had given me recently, taken apart and nicely lined up nex to each other. I had just used it yesterday to make notes on a knitting pattern.

So there it is: I guess I don't live alone??
 

it makes no sense to me..much less interest..it's just confusing ..... what does the long hair have to do with the story ?
It just adds detail. Haven't you read plenty of books and noticed that sometimes they are padded with detail that isn't germane to the story? Can't you picture the scene better knowing Dusty has long hair, as she goes about her business and then discovers that a man is living with her!

Your irrelevant detail is someone else's juicy story.
 
no usually if something like that is mentioned it becaomes eventually integral to the story.....adding something entirely unconnected makes no sense...
Yeah, but think about it. If we evaluated everyone's posts based on details that were not connected to the story, there are plenty of us who likely do that all the time.

Heck, I tell side stories that don't perfectly relate to the main story all the time. It's just that A reminds of Z and C and finally I might get back to A. That's a lot more of a crime than a little detail.
 
I am a tad confused as well. So, this is just a story? Or is it an real experience?
I think it is a story about a real experience. Like some people go fishing and come back with stories about what they caught. Or people who lived through an interesting period in history tell stories about it and bring history to life. That kind of thing, only about the present day -- today!
 

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