Poetry

This guy wrote quite a few poems, some very bad, some a bit better and then there is this one:

"Through a Glass, Darkly"
General George S. Patton, Jr.


Through the travail of the ages,
Midst the pomp and toil of war,
I have fought and strove and perished
Countless times upon this star.

In the form of many people
In all panoplies of time
Have I seen the luring vision
Of the Victory Maid, sublime.

I have battled for fresh mammoth,
I have warred for pastures new,
I have listed to the whispers
When the race trek instinct grew.

I have known the call to battle
In each changeless changing shape
From the high souled voice of conscience
To the beastly lust for rape.

I have sinned and I have suffered,
Played the hero and the knave;
Fought for belly, shame, or country,
And for each have found a grave.

I cannot name my battles
For the visions are not clear,
Yet, I see the twisted faces
And I feel the rending spear.

Perhaps I stabbed our Savior
In His sacred helpless side.
Yet, I've called His name in blessing
When after times I died.

In the dimness of the shadows
Where we hairy heathens warred,
I can taste in thought the lifeblood;
We used teeth before the sword.

While in later clearer vision
I can sense the coppery sweat,
Feel the pikes grow wet and slippery
When our Phalanx, Cyrus met.

Hear the rattle of the harness
Where the Persian darts bounced clear,
See their chariots wheel in panic
From the Hoplite's leveled spear.

See the goal grow monthly longer,
Reaching for the walls of Tyre.
Hear the crash of tons of granite,
Smell the quenchless eastern fire.

Still more clearly as a Roman,
Can I see the Legion close,
As our third rank moved in forward
And the short sword found our foes.

Once again I feel the anguish
Of that blistering treeless plain
When the Parthian showered death bolts,
And our discipline in vain.

I remember all the suffering
Of those arrows in my neck.
Yet, I stabbed a grinning savage
As I died upon my back.

Once again I smell the heat sparks
When my Flemish plate gave way
And the lance ripped through my entrails
As on Crecy's field I lay.

In the windless, blinding stillness
Of the glittering tropic sea
I can see the bubbles rising
Where we set the captives free.

Midst the spume of half a tempest
I have heard the bulwarks go
When the crashing, point blank round shot
Sent destruction to our foe.

I have fought with gun and cutlass
On the red and slippery deck
With all Hell aflame within me
And a rope around my neck.

And still later as a General
Have I galloped with Murat
When we laughed at death and numbers
Trusting in the Emperor's Star.

Till at last our star had faded,
And we shouted to our doom
Where the sunken road of Ohein
Closed us in it's quivering gloom.

So but now with Tanks a'clatter
Have I waddled on the foe
Belching death at twenty paces,
By the star shell's ghastly glow.

So as through a glass, and darkly
The age long strife I see
Where I fought in many guises,
Many names, but always me.

And I see not in my blindness
What the objects were I wrought,
But as God rules o'er our bickerings
It was through His will I fought.

So forever in the future,
Shall I battle as of yore,
Dying to be born a fighter,
But to die again, once more.

*****

Love this poem! I took the liberty of dropping one word in a line and then in another place, adding one word in a line.

I think I helped the rhythm with those two minor swaps.

George S. Patton was really an interesting type o' fella. Hated by many people and yet conversely, worshipped as God-Like by many others.

U.V.

My Dad and all the WWII vets around him...they all complained, about each and every General in WWII. If you heard the soldiers talk, there was not a single general who was worth much.

My take on history is that it is usually more complex. I absolutely believe that Patton was a very powerful general and a important force for stopping Hitler.

Was he too aggressive? I don't know. I think you need guys like him to win a war. I guess General Sherman from The Civil War, was probably a similar character. I think both had extraordinary military command skills.
 

Patton's winter drive across France to relieve Bastogne is one of the fastest moves of a large force in the history of warfare. He was tough, some say he took unnecessary chances that cost American lives---Although, there is a school of thought that he shortened the war and therefore saved American lives.

There is a theory that he was murdered because the fear was that his popularity with the American voter, might, MIGHT propel him into The White House. I really do not think he had political aspirations, but...still another fear was that he could single handedly start a war with Russia. Now that idea sounds to be more of possibility. He was no fan of The Russians. That is exactly what he wanted to happen while The U.S. was in Europe and "loaded for bear" (sorry, couldn't resist that one!!)---to engage Russia and take them out before they recovered from the war, and got stronger.
 
Another one of mine:

"Relativity"

The morning light shown through the blind
awakened me today,
something didn’t feel quite right
I pushed the thought away.

Seems late last night
I went to bed a lad of 23,
but somewhere in the realm of sleep
a change came over me...

I limped on down the hallway
pushed through the bathroom door,
my youthful stride; exuberance
weren’t there no more,

So I sneaked up on the mirror
to have a quick look-see;
there in all his glory
an old man stared at me!

Somehow many years slipped by
I must have seen them go,
somehow youth escaped me
I was the last to know.

The face was lined, the eyes were wise
the hair so thin and gray,
the teeth were worn from years of use
they’d seen a better day.

It took awhile but with some thought
my fearful shock redeemed,
the youthful lad of 23
was only what I’d dreamed!

I’d been there many years before
a vital strong young man,
although I thought I knew it all
were still some years to span.

Mistakes to make, broken dreams
friends who come and go,
lessons learned; bridges burned
with still much more to know.

And as I stood there staring
the old man back at me,
there was a message in his eyes
plain there I could see.

They said in no uncertain terms
23 was not so great;
I decided to go back to bed
and dream that I was 8!

*****

Perhaps too soon a day will come
I’ll sit and reminisce
‘bout the day I sat right here
and struggled writing this,

I’ll tell myself I didn’t know
all I thought I knew,
I’ll think about the things I’d seen
and things I’d left undone,

I’ll tell myself I was too young,
too young at 61...

-2012-
 

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Another of mine...I put it on the Introduction Page originally but it works better on this Poetry Thread, yeah huh?

The Path

Setting forth The Path is clear
our journey just begun,
with careful steps, and cautious hearts
could each be the one?
True to say that neither us can know what’s set to be,
t’was pre-ordained so long ago
by powers lost on me.

Not to say there is no choice
in what may come along,
to throw us off, or sway our hearts
so we must remain strong,
and be as true as two can be
with feelings that they share,
and let the other always know
they’re safe within our care.

With love lavished on; relied upon
ever mindful what one gives,
should come as freely as the wind
the sun, the moon, the stars.

And tho’ you may have carried long
from battles’ past the scars,
bear in mind my new found love
I was not a part your wars,
but I will strive to do my best
to close and bolt those doors,
and open others just the same
as we travel ‘long The Path,
and make you happy, make you smile
and ever make you laugh...

For laughter is a soothing balm
heals that which isn’t right,
melts away what weighs you down
bans terrors’ in the night,
and makes the bleakest darkest void
appear to still shed light.


I know I’ve tread The Path before
but somehow lost my way,
again perhaps t’was pre-ordained,
my past was meant to be
a means to ready me for you
and have my heart again set free,

So with this vow I promise you
I’ll try with all my might,
to give you calm and peace of mind–

And pray I do it right.

-2003-
 

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This guy wrote quite a few poems, some very bad, some a bit better and then there is this one:

"Through a Glass, Darkly"
General George S. Patton, Jr.


Through the travail of the ages,
Midst the pomp and toil of war,
I have fought and strove and perished
Countless times upon this star.

In the form of many people
In all panoplies of time
Have I seen the luring vision
Of the Victory Maid, sublime.

I have battled for fresh mammoth,
I have warred for pastures new,
I have listed to the whispers
When the race trek instinct grew.

I have known the call to battle
In each changeless changing shape
From the high souled voice of conscience
To the beastly lust for rape.

I have sinned and I have suffered,
Played the hero and the knave;
Fought for belly, shame, or country,
And for each have found a grave.

I cannot name my battles
For the visions are not clear,
Yet, I see the twisted faces
And I feel the rending spear.

Perhaps I stabbed our Savior
In His sacred helpless side.
Yet, I've called His name in blessing
When after times I died.

In the dimness of the shadows
Where we hairy heathens warred,
I can taste in thought the lifeblood;
We used teeth before the sword.

While in later clearer vision
I can sense the coppery sweat,
Feel the pikes grow wet and slippery
When our Phalanx, Cyrus met.

Hear the rattle of the harness
Where the Persian darts bounced clear,
See their chariots wheel in panic
From the Hoplite's leveled spear.

See the goal grow monthly longer,
Reaching for the walls of Tyre.
Hear the crash of tons of granite,
Smell the quenchless eastern fire.

Still more clearly as a Roman,
Can I see the Legion close,
As our third rank moved in forward
And the short sword found our foes.

Once again I feel the anguish
Of that blistering treeless plain
When the Parthian showered death bolts,
And our discipline in vain.

I remember all the suffering
Of those arrows in my neck.
Yet, I stabbed a grinning savage
As I died upon my back.

Once again I smell the heat sparks
When my Flemish plate gave way
And the lance ripped through my entrails
As on Crecy's field I lay.

In the windless, blinding stillness
Of the glittering tropic sea
I can see the bubbles rising
Where we set the captives free.

Midst the spume of half a tempest
I have heard the bulwarks go
When the crashing, point blank round shot
Sent destruction to our foe.

I have fought with gun and cutlass
On the red and slippery deck
With all Hell aflame within me
And a rope around my neck.

And still later as a General
Have I galloped with Murat
When we laughed at death and numbers
Trusting in the Emperor's Star.

Till at last our star had faded,
And we shouted to our doom
Where the sunken road of Ohein
Closed us in it's quivering gloom.

So but now with Tanks a'clatter
Have I waddled on the foe
Belching death at twenty paces,
By the star shell's ghastly glow.

So as through a glass, and darkly
The age long strife I see
Where I fought in many guises,
Many names, but always me.

And I see not in my blindness
What the objects were I wrought,
But as God rules o'er our bickerings
It was through His will I fought.

So forever in the future,
Shall I battle as of yore,
Dying to be born a fighter,
But to die again, once more.

*****

Love this poem! I took the liberty of dropping one word in a line and then in another place, adding one word in a line.

I think I helped the rhythm with those two minor swaps.

George S. Patton was really an interesting type o' fella. Hated by many people and yet conversely, worshipped as God-Like by many others.

U.V.
Far too dark for my taste, but it does give me a sense of the futility of war.
 
EM, George Patton fully recognized he had lived many lifetimes as a warrior. Sometimes as a leader and sometimes simply a rank and file soldier. What he speaks of in the poem he truly believed he witnessed.

Seems to me that idea of his reincarnation(s) was touched on too lightly in the movie Patton. The mention of his belief in reincarnation was too subtle for those who didn't know Patton was of that mindset, so it went over their heads.

George C. Scott won an academy award for his portrayal of General Patton, in 1969 or 1970, and he really did a great job of convincing people who had known Patton that he WAS Patton.

Funny thing was, George C. Scott was a bit of a pacifist and one who knew absolutely nothing of George S. Patton. He took that role because he felt it would be a challenge and a stretch for him. He read like 20 books on Patton and watched a couple hundred hours of real movie footage of the man, and as Scott said in an interview after he won that Best Actor Award, he had gotten Patton down via osmosis.

U.V.
 
EM, George Patton fully recognized he had lived many lifetimes as a warrior. Sometimes as a leader and sometimes simply a rank and file soldier. What he speaks of in the poem he truly believed he witnessed.

Seems to me that idea of his reincarnation(s) was touched on too lightly in the movie Patton. The mention of his belief in reincarnation was too subtle for those who didn't know Patton was of that mindset, so it went over their heads.

George C. Scott won an academy award for his portrayal of General Patton, in 1969 or 1970, and he really did a great job of convincing people who had known Patton that he WAS Patton.

Funny thing was, George C. Scott was a bit of a pacifist and one who knew absolutely nothing of George S. Patton. He took that role because he felt it would be a challenge and a stretch for him. He read like 20 books on Patton and watched a couple hundred hours of real movie footage of the man, and as Scott said in an interview after he won that Best Actor Award, he had gotten Patton down via osmosis.

U.V.
Thanks for the information! Since I never saw the movie, nor learned more of Patton than mentioned in history class, it is really enlightening - especially in context with the poem.
 
Yup EM, that simple fact of Patton believing that he was present for what he spoke of in this poem in regards to those battles is what makes this piece thoroughly embraced by me.

He wrote quite a few poems, but this one near as I figger is the best of all his efforts.

You can search for all his poetry on line. Try searching: "Poems by George S. Patton"---I may have found them in the past by a similar search, but in truth, I got's me a serious case of "CRS" so I honestly don't remember just when or where I had seen and read all his poetry.

U.V.
 
Yup EM, that simple fact of Patton believing that he was present for what he spoke of in this poem in regards to those battles is what makes this piece thoroughly embraced by me.

He wrote quite a few poems, but this one near as I figger is the best of all his efforts.

You can search for all his poetry on line. Try searching: "Poems by George S. Patton"---I may have found them in the past by a similar search, but in truth, I got's me a serious case of "CRS" so I honestly don't remember just when or where I had seen and read all his poetry.

U.V.
CRS ? Catholic Relief Services, Congressional Research Services, the Residential Real Estate Council??? Haha - I'm really poor at acronyms!

 
Patton's winter drive across France to relieve Bastogne is one of the fastest moves of a large force in the history of warfare. He was tough, some say he took unnecessary chances that cost American lives---Although, there is a school of thought that he shortened the war and therefore saved American lives.

There is a theory that he was murdered because the fear was that his popularity with the American voter, might, MIGHT propel him into The White House. I really do not think he had political aspirations, but...still another fear was that he could single handedly start a war with Russia. Now that idea sounds to be more of possibility. He was no fan of The Russians. That is exactly what he wanted to happen while The U.S. was in Europe and "loaded for bear" (sorry, couldn't resist that one!!)---to engage Russia and take them out before they recovered from the war, and got stronger.

Oh, I absolutely agree about the Battle of the Bulge actions.

Murdered? Well, you know, in human history, anything is possible.

Personally, I think it was just a straight up accident. The military use of roads had tons and tons of accidents. You know, no time to keep the roads well maintained.

Could a German agent have sabotaged his vehicle? Sure, that would always be a possibility. Hey, they blew up a ship right in New York harbor...

As far as a directed order from the military establishment? Eh, while anything is possible, but I don't think it all that likely. Reason being was that Eisenhower was a very straight shooter kind of guy. He really did not like underhanded tactics. You know, Churchill had his "toy shop" and I think the British culture at the time, was more likely to engage in political or military assassination.

But, again, I really don't think they would have done that. They were too heavily reliant on cooperation with the US, and would not really have wanted to ruffle feathers.

Again, the world is an unusual place, all kinds of different things going on, different factions.

Oh, my personal guess...less than a 10% chance it was anything but an accident. And I would give 9% chance of that to a German agent working behind the lines, rather than a "friendly-fire" assassination.

But who knows? I guess the best source would be some historian who did a deep dive into Patton's history and would know some of the inner history that the public doesn't really know. I have nowhere near that kind of level of knowledge. I just know general, basic info about him. Plus the stuff my Dad poured into my ear. And, like a lot of GIs...those guys were always coming up with ways they would have done it better if they were in command.
 
Patton died in the hospital after the accident under rather "fishy" circumstances.

Personally, with all The False Flag incidents in our government's back-story, killing one Pain In The Azz General pales in comparison.

Not trying to start a POLITICAL argument with anybody around here who believes that our leaders could never plot and take people out, American or otherwise, but I fully believe it as there are plenty of "fer instances" to be found in the history of our country.

U.V.
 
Patton died in the hospital after the accident under rather "fishy" circumstances.

Personally, with all The False Flag incidents in our government's back-story, killing one Pain In The Azz General pales in comparison.

Not trying to start a POLITICAL argument with anybody around here who believes that our leaders could never plot and take people out, American or otherwise, but I fully believe it as there are plenty of "fer instances" to be found in the history of our country.

U.V.

Oh, I believe there have been political assassinations. I think Kennedy was one. I think there is a slight chance it was not politically related, but Mafia related. Maybe some gangster died because of Kennedy's dad...and it was just a straight revenge killing. That the guy's father wanted Joe Kennedy to suffer the same fate he did.

Like I said, I don't really know enough details about Patton to know if he was a likely candidate for murder.

So, we knew a guy who worked in the meat packing district in Manhattan in the late 60s. His boss brought him back into the walk-in.
There was a small guy there. The boss nodded to the small guy and he hit a side of beef with just his hand. And his hand acted as good as a cleaver, chopping off slices of beef. He was a martial art expert.

So, the boss is walking our friend out. He says to our friend, "That's "A." You know what "A" did after the war? He was an assassin for the Israeli government. Went around Europe assassinating Nazis.

So, you know, I heard that story and believe it was true. So, sure, I believe assassinations and all sorts of things do happen.

Generally, I don't want to let my mind go to that place. Just too dark for me.

Though, frankly, I have zero problem with the Israelis going around Europe and assassinating Nazis.
 
Found another piece I wrote years ago. I have a bunch of my original poems I wrote saved on an old hard drive, and some in files here and there...I should compile all of them in ONE file, ya think?

Anyways, ran into this one whilst looking for something else which is the very best way to find stuff you aren't looking for:

Black Or White

There’s times I sit and think about
all the hats I’ve worn,
some were new and blinding white
others black and torn.

So many chapters to my life
so many things I’ve done,
so many battles that I’ve lost
still many have been won.

There haven’t been too many ties
or pushes if you will,
always basic black or white
no room for gray it seems,

Forever basic black or white
even in my dreams,
guess I’m stuck on black or white
ain’t no in-between’s.

VM-2003


U.V.
 


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