Do any of you write poetry?

Gaer

"Angel whisperer"
Come on, Jerryold and Gary O', and anyone else who writes poetry. Would you please post it here? This is a perfect time to write poetry! We would all love to read it!
 

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I wrote this when I was 10:
A Bright Day
A bright day
What a nice day for this time of year
The sun is shining, the sparrows chirping
And I feel like shedding not a tear
But soon the wintry wind
Will howl in a wintry way
Then I'll think back and remember the sun
And then I'll be happy and gay
 
I wrote this poem in '73 when I was in my early 20's
As I sit watching it
through half- dusted panes,it feels warm against my soul
wishing to grasp it with my own hands,moving in and out,playing a game
from clouds that want to cover it
telling us here on earth that day is nearly done
until I see a golden fireball sinking lower and lower
until the sky makes a blanket of red and orange lining
day is done once more until the next time
hopefully to touch the sun
 
The Birthday Party

Candles on the cake burn bright
A 60th birthday, her special night

Friends and loved ones all around
Sing 'Happy Birthday' a joyous sound

Her mind drifts back across the years,
Of heartbreak, loneliness and tears

Where were you when I was home alone ?
No knock on the door no ring of the phone...

Times I would've loved to share
A walk a joke, but no one was there

The party over, "goodnight" they say
"we'll phone, we'll meet for coffee one day"

Empty words, uttered often before
Mean nothing at all to her any more.....
 
Movie Queen 1 and Wren: Wow! Those are WONDERFUL! Thank you for posting those! Do some more!
I'm trying to coax JERRYOLD to share some of his INCREDIBLE poetry! I guess he needs a little more coaxing!
 
Here is one I wrote last night. It's prose, I guess. rhymes, you know.

Do men still breathe the wild air?

Do men exist not bridle bound?
who stand lone in morn's rise?
Men not meant to soft dispose
by yarded fence or women's cries?

What men assert this rebel stance?
Who fiery fights mundane?
revels boldly with abash
and strides in worldly reign

Who's hearty laugh , unbridled taunt
who's bond of word stands just?
who can't be shackled in restraint
for freedom is his lust.

Me who gouge the paths they walk
who's bearing merges large
He bends to none, he can't be girthed,
who greets his fate with charge?

Do men still breathe the wild air?
 
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April

Looking out my window,
snow is slowly drifting down,
Covering up the bleakness,
that permeates the ground…

Trees gray and leafless,
appearing lifeless- at their worst,
Yet if you stop and listen,
you can almost feel spring about to burst…
Flitting birds chirp all abuzz,
soft breeze swirl, snow in the air,
That carries a damp chill,
Have faith winter is turning fair…
Don’t let this flurry fool ya,
spring is just around the bend,
The buds and flowers will spring forth,
as the calendar reads April once again.
Ronald J. Curell
March 2013
 
Mourning Glories

Southern lawns
Manicured
Meticulous
Monotonous
I see
bright blossoms and magnolia trees
swathed in carpets of flawless green.
But one lone Morning Glory
blooms
where weeds and asphalt and drainpipe meet.
Beauty outside bounds of pristine green.

Southern lives
Manicured
Meticulous
Monotonous
I see
sculptured smiles and soft syllables
swimming in hymns of pious praise.
Manicured faith.

Oh, God
Open my heart.
Grace me to be one of your Mourning Glories
blooming
where hurt and sorrow and loneliness meet.
Beauty outside bounds of pristine green.

published 1991

Story behind this. Saw the morning glory blooming as described while out walking shortly before I left a rigid Calvinist denomination to worship in an inner city, diverse, love-filled church with a lot of other hurting people. Decided I'd erred on the side of legalistic theological 'law' and made a conscious decision to 'err' on the side of love. Ashamed to say I have to dig deep sometimes to get back to the wonderful lessons I learned there, but they are still in my heart.
 
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Creases in time

This ancient wife of mine
old and lumpy, beneath the sheets
stirs in the moonlight
cooing.


She coos again, fluttering a shenny eye.
Jerking, she falls back into the present
Pushing against my ample belly, her coos turn
into gentle sighs.

She’s been a decade without coos,
What could she be remembering?
me, another before my time?
old women and their sighs
 
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I'm much better at dissecting poems than writing them.
the rules of poesy are twisted, disturbing the emotive content of a poem.
My sweetheart, Miss Emily had no choice, 'I must write, it is not an urge, it drives into my brain'
-give her poetry a look-see, she talks to your brain.
 
Are you going to add some of your poetry?
Well, I've got just the one, and I've posted it too many times, but, since this is the poetry thread...... looks like I'll be posting it again;

(a little story goes with it)

I’ll Never Forget My First Friend

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I was three.
He was a few months.
Neither of us had much to play with….but each other.
We never lacked.
He’d look up at me with complete unwavering trust.
Trying to read my face.
Ears perked up when I spoke.
Wherever I went, he followed.
He rapidly grew, and soon we were face high to each other.
We’d roam the patch of woods up the hill from our place, him guarding my every step, sometimes blocking my way when I got too close to the cliff edge. I didn’t know it at the time.
I’d take my naps nestled into his chest.
He’d lie there, never moving a muscle.

As I grew to boyhood, he remained a part of me, my shadow.
We’d wrestle….he’d let me win.

We’d hunt.

We’d fish.

Not that he took part.
He was no hunting dog.
Just my companion.
We’d share lunch.
He’d listen to my every word, as we sat on the creek bank.

Years passed.
I got very busy, but not so busy that we wouldn’t still roam the woods every so often, even though he had a bit of a time keeping up.

The day came when he just didn’t get up.
I was sixteen.
Mom told me to take him in to the vet.
‘He’ll be able to fix him up.’

I gathered him up and laid him in the passenger’s seat of the pickup, right beside me, and we had one of our conversations while I drove the twenty miles.
It had been awhile.
Too long actually.


I sat on the stool beside the exam table, while the vet did his thing.
Once again my best friend and I were face high to each other.
The vet was talking with my mom.
He handed me the phone.
It was time.
He had to be put to sleep.

OK, I brought him in to get fixed up, and now he’s going to be put down….just like that.



I was told I had to leave the room.

Like hell.

The vet did…..something. I don’t recall.

I held my best friend’s face with both hands.


His ears perked up as we had what would be our last conversation, telling him the reality.
Then I just cradled his head, holding it to my chest, not moving a muscle until, feeling his last breath against my heart, he went to sleep.

Even though the wipers were going, I had a hard time seeing through the rain drops on the way back home.


……..I’ll never forget my first friend


and the poem (a quite simple one);

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I guess this is my day to fill my eyes with tears. Gary o" and Jerryold; You did it! You both responded to my call; and both so incredibly talented! I can't talk, can't write. Don't know what to say. except, you guys made this the best thread EVER! Please keep 'em comin'!

Thank you.
 
All my poetry is on loose scraps of paper,thrown in boxes with art sketches, but I found a couple. Don'tknow if they are any good.

Live gently.
Be tickled at the whisperings
softly flowing from your soul.
Brush the subtle delicateness
so deep within your
tenderest dreams.
Can you feel the quiet
purr of peace
that charms you with the
glow of love
and drifts you into esctasy?
Amongst the flush of lovely silence
blows the breath
of all existence.

I'll wait on the other one.
 
Don'tknow if they are any good.
Oh, it's good alright

I can't creatively go there, so I just do the simple
'simple'...as in simpleton
I do appreciate what true poets come up with, but don't generally seek it
Mainly because I don't have a poetic bone in my body

I'll be in the woods

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Don't show me that. ( teehee! ) I used to collect paintings of Mountain men. (James Bama?)
 

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