Shalimar
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My creative voice has been largely silent the last few months, but now I can write again. It is not cheerful, but raw, intense, often painful. Release is a huge relief.
My creative voice has been largely silent the last few months, but now I can write again. It is not cheerful, but raw, intense, often painful. Release is a huge relief.
Thank you my friend, This is my first effort. I just finished writing it. Poured out of me like a molten waterfallI can relate my friend, may your pen be prolific.
Sometimes spontaneous composition is the best.Thank you my friend, I hope you like my first effort. I just finished writing it. Poured out of me like a mountain waterfall
My creative voice has been largely silent the last few months, but now I can write again. It is not cheerful, but raw, intense, often painful. Release is a huge relief.
I generally rewrite mine 2 or 3 times but have settled for originals here and there.I agree
It's the only way to fly.I subscribe to the cudgel school of poetry. Beat the readers over the head with emotional imagery until they grovel at your feet.
I knowIt's the only way to fly.
Absolutely. This ‘world,’at least, makes sense.Shalimar, in this crazy world we live in, many people rely on, and at times is their only reliance, to create from within for a companion.
Excellent. It is a deeply felt and very well expressed poem! It reminded me of this poem :Requiem
Time is a whip,
It’s severed screams
Mock rigid bones beneath
The dream. Beloved, I cast
Bloody runes, flailing in the
Dark where sad shreds
Of youth still cling, mute in
The misery of age, reeling
In a cowering rage as love
Lies battered, bound to the
Grieving dead.
Excellent. It is a deeply felt and very well expressed poem! It reminded me of this poem :
From childhood's hour I have not been
As others were -- I have not seen
As others saw -- I could not bring
My passions from a common spring --
From the same source I have not taken
My sorrow -- I could not awaken
My heart to joy at the same tone --
And all I lov'd -- I lov'd alone --
Then -- in my childhood -- in the dawn
Of a most stormy life -- was drawn
From ev'ry depth of good and ill
The mystery which binds me still --
From the torrent, or the fountain --
From the red cliff of the mountain --
From the sun that 'round me roll'd
In its autumn tint of gold --
From the lightning in the sky
As it pass'd me flying by --
From the thunder, and the storm --
And the cloud that took the form
(When the rest of Heaven was blue)
Of a demon in my view --
Edgar Allan Poe
Do you start with a conclusion in mind or just see where it goes?My creative voice has been largely silent the last few months, but now I can write again. It is not cheerful, but raw, intense, often painful. Release is a huge relief.